July 28th, 2012, 10:38 am

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Reply TH3GADFLY, July 28th, 2012, 10:41 am

Last page in greyscale. You've done me well monochrome, but it's time I move on.

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Reply CityBreak, July 28th, 2012, 1:39 pm

dude, this comic is so fucking awesome

Reply TH3GADFLY, July 28th, 2012, 3:31 pm

@CityBreak: Why thank you!

Reply Don Quixote (Guest), July 28th, 2012, 3:42 pm

Agreement With above comment by CityBreak and the criticism on the second to last page.
For instance, I didn't really know that was Street's face two pages ago in the top panel. Maybe it's the B/W, maybe it was just cluttered, IDK, but they were right in the 'show, don't tell' advice.

That said, good to be caught up! Love to see how this moves forward.

Reply TH3GADFLY, July 28th, 2012, 3:48 pm

@Don Quixote: Thanks for that critisism. When I do my rounds of cleanup I'll try to tone down the shading in some pages among other things. The next chapter will be more planned out that this one, and I will try to put an emphasis on "showing more", but I'm glad that despite the flaws you still found my comic enjoyable.
Don't be afraid in the near future to give me any criticism you think needs to be brought up.

Reply Don Quixotes, July 31st, 2012, 11:38 pm

new account~ @TH3GADFLY: Just thought u should know this will be my commenting account. Prepare for the scathing tongue-lashings of a thousand immature internet trolls!!1!

Reply TH3GADFLY, August 1st, 2012, 5:57 pm

@Don Quixotes: I await them vigorously

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